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2006-Feb-16 by Laughcalvin

Utterly unpro I know- but can you give us a hand...? Brothers and Sisters..? Here's the set-up: A Pawn shop for the poorest people in Amer$ca. An Eccentric, All-Powerful Pawnbroker. A crowd of the poor pawning the kitchen sink and their chillins textbooks. An American Indian Christ Figure in line to pawn his crown of thorns. A 14-year-old woman-child, sexy beyond all human reason, shows up dressed in duct tape and dust...What happens next?




2006-Feb-17 - re: what happens next Posted by Anonymous

the 14 year old woman-child knows a dark & powerful secret about the pawnbroker. she allies herself w/ some of the customers of the pawnbroker - to coerce him into giving them a better deal, or else the secret gets out, then the native american dude intervenes and throws a wrench into the plans of the group led by the woman-child. continue from there.

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2006-Feb-17 - re: previous post Posted by Anonymous

btw, I wrote that (the comment w/ the woman-child knowing a dark secret about the pawnbroker...), forgot to sign it.

Sujewa
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2006-Feb-17 - Not far off! Posted by BlogMaster

Add mind channeling to your many talents, Sujewa! I suppose, if pressed, I could cough up a story credit..:)

LC

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2006-Feb-17 - Untitled Comment Posted by Dbannon

The A. indian offers his crown of thorns to the woman child explaining to her that he no longer needs it, and she deserves to benefit from its sale more than he does. Seeing a greater oppritunity for profit the girl takes the crown and places it for sale on Ebay anticipating a lofty bid from the Golden Palace.
cont.

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